Examples

Essay Editing Examples

For a better idea of how we work and what results you can expect from your edited essay, article or product, here are some examples from our versatile team of editors, writers and analysts.  No matter what the content of your essay, short story, resume or statement of purpose, we have editors who can expertly handle all of your writing needs.

These examples come from real writers, submitting real writing.  They cover a variety of different subject matters, intended audiences and competence levels.  We hope that this will help you see the sort of work we can do for you, and what you can expect back from your Wordsmith Essays submission.

Edited Essay Example

This essay was sent in by an international student at an American university.  The student was tasked with writing an essay analyzing a health or disease current event.

Essay Before Editing

Essay Before Editing

Essay After Editing

Essay After Editing


Edited Assignment Example

Length is not an issue for our editors.  This assignment asked the student to make a quick response to a text they had read, and to relate it to themselves.

Assignment Before Editing

Assignment Before Editing

Assignment After Editing

Assignment After Editing


Cover Letter Editing Example

This student was tasked with writing a cover letter for a portfolio of work they had put together over a quarter in their writing class.

Letter Before Editing

Letter Before Editing

Letter After Editing

Letter After Editing


Statement of Purpose Editing Example

This was a statement of purpose written by someone applying to some competitive UK universities, looking for both an edit as well as advice on the strong and weak parts of his statement.

Statement of Purpose Before Editing

Statement of Purpose Before Editing

Statement of Purpose After Editing

Statement of Purpose After Editing


Analytical Essay Editing Example

A film student was asked to analyze the visual design of a scene in a film, and to respond to that in a paper.

Essay Before Editing

Essay Before Editing

Essay After Editing

Essay After Editing

Job Application Editing Example

This client was applying for a job, and wanted to make sure their long-form answers would help them ace their job interview.

Job Application Before Editing

Job Application Before Editing

Job Application After Editing

Job Application After Editing